Education is one the profound process which everyone used to go through in his/her lifetime. While some people argue that Einstein was right in saying that education is biggest barrier in his learning but some find education system without any fault. This essay will discuss the reasons that why Einstein was right in his statement.
To commence with, there are many reasons which assert that education is barrier to learning. First and foremost, nowadays education makes child mind inactive and dull. To instance, various scientific research undertaken by prestigious university assert that education system needs reformation. Hence, it can be taken into account that education system can act a stoppage to creative minds.
Further reinforcing, education system is basically based on pre-existed laws and algorithm which leave very small room for creative thinking .Education system should allow students to think out of box. To give an illustration, in worldwide there is great dearth of talented students. Therefore, education system needs much improvement for learning.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed that preexisted formula are making the student inactive and not intelligent. Therefore, I would strongly recommend that Einstein is the profound scientist of all time and is completely right in his statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63184079602 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8138539963 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636815920398 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7766646078 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192894491841 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661785152877 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627238521704 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110940723499 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674736946762 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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