These days there is ongoing debate going on between people about whether in underdeveloped countries, tourism can be beneficial or it has only side-effects.Tourism can proved to be boon to the economy of underdeveloped nation if it is well implemented. This essay will discuss the reasons that why tourism has myriad advantages and if fruitful for country's in every terms.
To commence with, Tourism brings lots of foreign currency in the nation which can help in growth of the country.Moreover, it give lots of employment to indigenous people as they can sell local handcrafted good and food to visitors .For instance, in Nepal the mostly revenue comes through tourism industry. Hence, it can inferred that there are many advantages of tourism industry.
Those who argue for its cons have a different view and say that it can also be a threat to local cultures of the nation. Foreign people can influence the local culture which might not be respectful.A tangible example is that in eastern counties , hugging is not allowed in public place.Such issue might raise some concern and also may be seen as a threat to the nation's long standing ethics
To recapitulate , this essay discussed both the merits and demerits of tourism industry in the underdeveloped countries .In my opinion,tourism helps in sustainable development of any nation and i would strongly recommend that its advantages outweighs its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19565217391 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16140506982 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.5024630542 185% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.995486047 50.4703680194 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.166666667 104.977214359 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.3333333333 20.9669160288 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.25397266985 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.33497536946 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266008908199 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12964149574 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648198561984 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152395221776 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070070191252 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 12.6369458128 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 53.1260098522 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.3980295567 165% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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