The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
In recent days, there was a hot topic which speaks in different countries is about, the global environment is in danger for the various problem and that should be responsible for each individual like government, organization and people also. we will discuss deeply the topic in the below paragraph.
First, In today’s life natural disaster has played a vital role throughout the countries. it’s due to natural demolition in our country such as earthquake, floods, whirlwind and so on. For instance, flood it is mainly responsible for the government who has approved to build a house or flats in flood areas it led to being in danger place. And also, people should have an awareness that the building does not build in flood areas.
Furthermore, there are more problems like cutting trees and destroying cultivation areas it may cause natural tragedy. it’s because of industrial organisations they were planning a project in cultivating lands it is a fault on both sides namely people’s and government sectors. The government should not approve to make a project in agriculture lands and they must give some scheme to develop the land for farmers.
Last but not least, we are all responsible for the environmental disaster and it led to various problems in our living places. so, we must aware of natural hazards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11415525114 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9055379733 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4270182678 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.818181818 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303691004147 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973323243565 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100742688203 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186182676716 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102579943468 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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