giving freedom to children is more than earlier. does it have an advantage or disadvantage
freedom is mean by someone can do whatever they want in their life but they do not against the law. Nowadays many parents do not trust their own children and some of them take action by controlling their children life and also their activities. this is not the best way for children because it may feel stress and it may lead to do crimes. so today children should give freedom for their own enjoyment.
Fristly children should be given freedom to make their own decision in what they want to do in their life by this way they can know how to manage their outside life and they can learn how to solve any problems in future life. every child has their unique talents and they always want to be the best. For example children can make their own decision to choose their course in university instead of parents decision by that time only they know their ability.
in addition children should not against law by that time parent punished their children. for me parents can control their own child but cannot treat them as they do not know anything. just give them chance to go along with their life and hobbies
By concluding children need their own freedom to make their own decision do what they want and even choose their own friends.so children happy in what they do they will succeed in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 20.9802955665 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52340425532 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08821305688 2.71678728327 77% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451063829787 0.580463131201 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0101630878 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863332913625 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559668888043 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047795937571 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729048834524 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269953010584 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 53.1260098522 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.32886699507 79% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 55.0591133005 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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