The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
An essential problem of the 21 st century is the global problem that is increasing at an alarming rate, which leads to a moot question “who is responsible for this?”. It is a widely held view that the government must be held responsible for the problem mentioned above, while I tend to believe that the solution requires both legal actions of higher authorities and individual decision.
From a social point of view, global problems are indeed bound to the industrialization, which means it might lead to both enormous carbon emission and the burning of fossil fuels. For example, a group of profound environmentalists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between rainforests and natural calamities as well as the rising sea levels. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that being under the threat of mass extinction is positively correlated with not only deforestation but also desertification.
In political and environmental terms, such problems are undoubtedly attributable to the production of the greenhouse gases, in that it would lead to the depletion of ozone layer, the climate change, and the clean energy. A well-known example of such attributions is renewable energy sources, which are cause for concern since they had been mistaken in taking the environmental preservation for granted. Had they protected the natural environment in advance, they might have had the opportunity to save the planet. Thus, protecting the environment could play a significant role in the prosperity of future generations.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the positive consequences of the industrializations are of more significance. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57534246575 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44161554841 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4550321171 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141093493768 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441277472126 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380188057519 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748633052842 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560281079888 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 12.6369458128 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 53.1260098522 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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