The environment we are living is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlyingcauses? Who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual? what measures?

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The environment we are living is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying
causes? Who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual? what measures?

Submitted by thanuja01 on Fri, 12/07/2018 - 04:46

In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among the people about the positive and the negative effects on society due to environmental pollution and other different risks. While it is possible to claim that the modern humans in the developed world, my point of view is that the mother earth is in a danger. In this essay, I will explain my point of view while analysing different sides of the argument to a greater extent.

First and foremost, there are myriad problems species are facing due to the environment such as life quality, life availability, integrity, confidentiality, environment usability and security. For example, the United States of America has faced many hurricanes because of the environmental changes. Therefore, it is considered that the above risks should be mitigated for a proper culture.

On the other hand, those who believed the other side of the argument have a different point of view and say there is no risk for the mother earth. For example, China has been destroyed their air and water, even though they have well-established rules and regulations. Therefore, it is considered governments are the accountable party for the risk mitigation.

In conclusion, it is strongly believed that every human being lives in this globe should protect the nature and marine ecosystems for the next generation of the animals. In nutshell, it is strongly believed that the governments and the professionals should implement better quality rules and regulations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
... First and foremost, there are myriad problems species are facing due to the environme...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23236514523 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01357956874 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4476277433 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.636363636 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802264854769 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294000252523 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286307877651 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486471071617 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286589414791 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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