The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures?
In these days, there is no denying the reality that the environment in which we are living in is in danger due to various problems. It is said the general causes of this phenomenon are the dramatic declining in morality and the pursuit of personal interest in an increasingly complicated world. This essay offers some suggestions which aim at resolving the problem in both short and long term.
The first possible solution that one can consider is to cut down on the use of private vehicles. This is true especially because cars release a huge amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, which results in air pollution and other environmental issues such as global warming and drought in certain parts of the world. Without the reduction carbon dioxide emission, it can be argued that the air pollution would be exacerbated and hence, poses threat to human’s life.
In addition, ample evidence from a number of studies also suggests that it is possible to resolve the problem by planting more trees. This is because the deforestation around the world is at an alarming rate due to increasing demand for housing and commercial buildings. If this persists without proper measures, it can be argued that in the future, human would die out due to lack of clean air and other environment-related diseases such as lung cancer which results from the polluted air.
In conclusion, from the above analysis, it is obvious that we could save our environment by limiting the use of private cars and planting more trees.
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- It is believed that there are as many as 1800 rare plants and animals on Earth. Should we protect the endanged species? Agree disagree? 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9609375 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8018897083 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2378466945 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1472953463 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616722107082 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842049649544 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093002552875 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754273257048 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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