the environment we living in is in danger due to various problems..so who do you think should be responsible to solve this. Is it governments, organizations or each individuals?
Threat to environment we are living in; who should take action? In my opinion everybody – governments, organizations and individuals are responsible to resolve this situation. All of these play vital role in dealing environmental problems.
Firstly, governments are responsible to create necessary legislatures to control environmental problems like air pollution, soil erosion and global warming. Majority of pollution comes from vehicular emission of carbon monoxide and related gases. If government can enforce strict emission standards which all car makers need to follow then this can be avoided. Also government can create alternative means of transport like subways which will reduce traffic on roads and can bring down pollution. Similar actions are required to control global warming.
Secondly, Organizations can play vital role in dealing with environmental problems by abiding by regulations created by government. Industrial organization dump lot of industrial waste into rivers resulting into water pollution. Research in dealing Industrial waste is need of the hour. If these organizations can achieve this then it will help to avoid polluted water to enter water cycle. More Not For Profit organizations are required and they can educate individuals not to waste and pollute natural resources.
Lastly, each individual is responsible for safe keeping of environment. We can help by using public transport, car-pooling and other means whether we are commuting for work or leisure. This will help in reducing air pollution.
Keeping environment healthy is responsibility of everybody and hence each is expected to play it role to safeguard environment for future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n of carbon monoxide and related gases. If government can enforce strict emission ...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...eed to follow then this can be avoided. Also government can create alternative means...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g Industrial waste is need of the hour. If these organizations can achieve this th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71936758893 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14081303577 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.325123152709 308% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1824941538 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1176470588 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194630750397 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652858010492 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684247206007 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131390863324 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925739911344 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.3 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.25 Out of 90
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