Recently,the phenomenon of extreme sport and its corresponding impacts has sparked heated debate.Although contested by many that the matter of sport is highly beneficial,such lssue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals.I am inclined to believe that physical activities can be a plus , and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint , extreme sports can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of money , as well as facilities are inextricably bound up.According to my own experience when I was a university student , I performed an academic experiment , which discovered the impact of excitement on my life. Thus beneficial ramifications of both hapy life and edge apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science , extreme sports might increas the consequences of disturb body. Moreover , fundamental aspects of serious injuries could relate to this reality the demerits of disturbing body pertain to increasing the level of adrenalin . As a tangible example , some scientific research undertaken by a perstigious university has asserted that the downside of mental problems is correlated negatively with adrenalin . Hence , it is correct to persume the preconceived notion of society was wrong.
To conclude , while there are several complling arguments on both sides , I profoundly believe that the benefits of extreme sports for outweigh its drawback.not only do the anvantages of developing self confidence prove the significance of universal interests, but also pinpoint making money implications.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.5418719212 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 20.9802955665 5% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 31.9359605911 3% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 85.0 1207.87684729 7% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 13.0 242.827586207 5% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.53846153846 5.00649968141 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.89882892212 3.92707691288 48% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 3.34239399729 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 13.0 139.433497537 9% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.580463131201 172% => OK
syllable_count: 25.2 379.143842365 7% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.9669160288 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.25397266985 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317997661666 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317997661666 0.0925447433944 344% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317997661666 0.151781067708 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.9 53.1260098522 62% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.76 11.5310837438 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.0 8.32886699507 168% => OK
difficult_words: 8.0 55.0591133005 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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