Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Nowadays, adventure sports are becoming far more popular, which attracted numerous controversies and draw attention from the public. It can be agreed that the extreme sports should be banned to prevent individuals from injuries, while on the other hand stands a perspective that it should not be banned as every human has the freedom to do whatever they want. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various reasons why the government should take steps to stop individuals to participate in dangerous sports but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that participating in adventurous sports can lead to major accidents. Furthermore, people who encounter any major accident may lose their life and ability to walk, hear, and see. For example, a recent study illustrates that in Sydney majority of people who joined extreme sports are disabled and not even able to get up from the bed. Therefore, the government should take some important steps to ban these kinds of activities.
On the other hands, few people have contradicted view in favor of extreme sports. According to them, everyone on this earth has the freedom to enjoy their life as they want and participating in dangerous sports is a great source of happiness for people who love extreme sports. Moreover, it can also make someone famous in all over the world. As an illustration, Indian fighter Khali becomes famous after winning his third fight with foreigner fighter. Thereby, instead of banning extreme sports government should make it legal.
In light of the discussion above, it can be concluded that impact of adventure sports are prominent and government and people should join hand in hand to stop these activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, third, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09965635739 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70319859155 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7673177296 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207497921858 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708676907498 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735902641303 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131904843408 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406794612729 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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