Nowadays, due to the increased facilities most of the people from rural areas tend to move to the urban areas, which attracted the numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the public. It can be said that this move from less developed areas to developed region is better for the rural area population, while on the other hand stands a perspective that it can create problems for the people who live in cities. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
At the very outset, there are myriad of reasons why it is beneficial for countryside people to move to the cities, but the most preponderant on stems from the fact that by moving to urban areas people can access the various facilities like as, better education, hospital services, and good work opportunities. Moreover, by taking the advantage of all these facilities rural area people can make their life far more better than rural areas. Therefore, all advanced facilities can helps the village people to improve their lifestyle.
Notwithstanding, some people hold and opposing view and tend to believe that welcoming the rural area people in cities means giving the rise to the problems like as, road traffic, overcrowding, and pollution. Furthermore, all these hackles will not only made the life of city people difficult, but also create problems for the management councils. For example, specifically, a study conducted by the University of Sydney found the there is a drastic increase in poverty as a result of people movement from villages to cities.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that everyone hold an opposing about the movement of rural area people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0640569395 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74145186235 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8185158732 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.3 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.25397266985 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40418617308 0.242375264174 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154909998853 0.0925447433944 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937949208245 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240622322498 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738326147997 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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