fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year, what are cause of this crucial problem? what are the solution?

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fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year, what are cause of this crucial problem? what are the solution?

The importance fresh water diminish large cities which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that people use lot of water and water sewerage is full water is not down in sewerage and he turned into water pollution. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the many factories can increase water pollution and water can make so many diseases. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead.

However, there are some pitfall that negate these argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that people not waste water and says government the cleaning the sewerage. Besides, the many factories can increase water pollution the government can closed this factories. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.

According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of fresh water diminish large cities are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'pitfalls'?
Suggestion: pitfalls
...n good stead. However, there are some pitfall that negate these argument and which ca...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
...ver, there are some pitfall that negate these argument and which can certainly overwhelm the p...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ter pollution the government can closed this factories. Hence, it is apparent why ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22072072072 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59315916875 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563063063063 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5348780716 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182181236823 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751576730814 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057530220985 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123701559994 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308387381157 0.0609392437508 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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