Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion?
Genetic engineering is one of the technology advancements that creates a controversial issue to humankind. Some people believe that it improves humans live in many ways. While others argue that it may be threat to life on earth. I am inclined to believe that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks. This essay will discuss benefits of genetic engineering and provide a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, the first and foremost, it is very beneficial for agricultural world, as its increase the food production and improve the nutritional quality. Undoubtedly, world is facing the drastic population growth which means the food supply is inadequate because of high demand. As it basically can resist crops from pests and withstand severe weather conditions and also reduce dangerous pesticides in environment. For example, Scientists conducted an experiment to made crops to resist severe weather conditions like hail rain and extreme draught conditions which led increment in yield.
To continue with, genetic engineering provides numerous advantages to medical fields, because of genetic modification several drugs, vaccines and insulin have been created to treat human diseases. It’s really useful to treat hereditary illnesses as well such as down syndrome and sickle cell and developed a solution where defective gene can be replaced by healthy genes. For instance, people started to have this new insulin medicine to control their blood sugar level so they do not need to worry about when they suffer from diabetes. Therefore, genetic engineering is the best method so far to curb and deal with human difficulties.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that genetic engineering brings far-reaching benefits to human beings mainly to deal with world hunger problem and cure illnesses. In my opinion, the advantages of genetic engineering outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56701030928 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93260263945 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642611683849 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2099801125 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227867209721 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803127391673 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850714430738 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141039249499 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111676398786 0.0609392437508 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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