Give an example of an accomplished person whose success didn't have any effect of his bad neighbourhood.
The effect of bad neighbourhood on a person’s accomplishment which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The potential impact of the corrupt neighbourhood has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the achievement of one’s success over the years. This essay will elaborate how bad neighbourhood inspired him to become successful and how it educated him to deal with the hardship.
Mr X has been influenced positively by the bad elements of the society he grew up in, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that sorrows and sufferings, which his neighbourhood endured, have stimulated his personality to avoid the similar destiny by achieving success in life. For instance, Mr X resided in a neighbourhood where jail term was inevitable due to drug dealings, however, these inspired him to take a different path to avoid the same fate.
Another key justification to support this notion is that not only did Mr X learn how to deal with the hardships of life while living in the corrupt neighbourhood which in turn created a strong personality to deal with the similar situations in life, but it also paved the way for him to become accomplished. As an illustration, not only was he moved by the poverty and how it can lead to crime, but he also learnt how hard work can help to avoid wrongdoings and help him earn money.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that the impact of bad neighbourhood on success was prominent, and the way it prepared him for the difficulties of life should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19305019305 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32011311792 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.5024630542 210% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.304136115 50.4703680194 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.166666667 104.977214359 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.1666666667 20.9669160288 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205330735496 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112806535021 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601983899068 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119499240805 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560652478081 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 12.6369458128 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 53.1260098522 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.9458128079 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.3980295567 185% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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