Global climate change. who should take responsibility to avoid climate change?
Climate change is one of the most worrying concern our planet facing nowadays. The climate of our planet is distracted due to various reasons.This essay will discuss the most important reasons for climate change and explain who should take responsibility for these changes.
To begin with, climate change is the change in the statistical distribution of weather patterns and that changes last for an extended period of time.The main cause of climate change is Global warming effects which cause total damage to the entire planet. Global warming is the serious effects which occur due to the enormous increase of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, there is a various situation of increasing the concentration of carbon footprint in the atmosphere, including fossil fuel burning, deforestation, toxic fumes from factories.The main victim Global warming is Oceans. because oceans are the lifeline and it makes 70% of the oxygen we breathe and also it gives new medicine, food and resources. Due to global warming, the temperature of our planet increase, that leads to melting of polar glaciers, which will negatively affect polar creatures, in addition, sea temperature rise, will damage coral reefs and fisheries.
Furthermore, climate change is not only created by one day or one year, it is the result of day to day activities. so government and, organizations should educate people about the effects of climate change to eradicate this issue.
In conclusion, It is the responsibility of humankind to eliminate the climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91682180004 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5815883368 50.4703680194 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391725772176 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160232897101 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117234759888 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255211884193 0.151781067708 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739989245226 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.