Global climate change. who should take responsibility to avoid climate change from government, corporate and individual discuss.
One of the most predetermine trends of current presences is global climate change. Climate change has the most devastating effects on the face of planet in terms of social and ecological. It is a moot question as to which authorities from government, corporate and individuals should take responsibilities for these changes. This essay will discuss how global climate change affects the environment and living species on earth and who should take the task in their control.
Firstly, global climate change is the change in statistical weather pattern. It is normally due to excess increase in pollution and other causes. For example, the increase in pollution affects the sea level and climate pattern, which generally affects the living species with lack of oxygen to breathe and spread various diseases. Therefore, global climate change have negative impacts on all living and non-living things.
Secondly, everyone including government, corporate and individuals need to contribute to tackle global climate change. We all must take certain amount of responsibilities to curb the issue. For example, cutting of forests and burning of fuels should be avoided by individuals, corporate companies needs to install smoke purifiers inside the chimney to prevent toxic gas. And lastly government should conduct different awareness programs and seminars on how to control global climate change. Hence it is apparent that everyone must take the responsibilities.
To conclude, this essay discuss how global climate change affects the nature and all the authorities like government, corporate and individuals should take responsibilities. In my opinion, climate change is a serious issue and everyone must think of controlling it with proper actions and pol
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57462686567 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98182659113 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9477436437 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.567389572224 0.242375264174 234% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177556183349 0.0925447433944 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113544552758 0.071462118173 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352031165354 0.151781067708 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11661123889 0.0609392437508 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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