The government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Although such topics will never yield a consensual agreement a dialogue on government initiation in science education development can lead to thought provoking discussions. my view is that irrespective of numerous of the arguments, as the increase in advancement of technologies science should play major role, rather than other subjects. through the couse of this essay, i disagree with this satement and i shall explain my point of view through this debate.
Due to the advancement of technology, science plays a major role in this socity. Nowadays people are thriving for technologies, as science included. government should invest money and should develop by bringing more features in them. as we are in the twenty first century robotic science education should be developed from the base of the acadamic whereas from the school times for children's so when they turn in adults they can try acheaving new inventions.
In addition, There are few statements should be agreed from the other subjects for educational development. people should know that economic, arts and business education and rest is aslo important for life to survive in a socitey. people cannot be independent with science and technology and skipping the rest subjects. furthermore people will be developed in both skills, knowledge which will help them in future to get a qualified career.
To conclude with, there are potential evidence placed on this essay by disagreeing the statement science plays a major role in present sate but there are other few subjects to be considered to develop the country. government should invest money equally in other educational systems not only for robotic science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 5.75862068966 417% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31460674157 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83744883309 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.730875478 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380243505548 0.242375264174 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133404833621 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827922306983 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237646289765 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639384900982 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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