he environment we are living is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who do you think is responsible for this ? Is it governments, organization or each individual? What measures?
Nowadays, environmental degradation is on rise, which has attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. It can be agreed that deforestation is the main cause, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that individuals are solely responsible for this havoc. This essay will elaborate how pollution is the biggest worry and how it can be treated by afforestation and, thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons how our individuals have polluted the environment and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that more and more trees are now cut down by man. As an illustration, we have seen that large lands are cleared up due to an increase in number of industries and cause adverse effects on the environment. Furthermore, the industrial wastes and effluents pose a threat to fauna. Hence, the greedy needs of man have led to this menace.
Approaches to deal with the setbacks originated by environmental pollution are numerous and the most effective one is to grow more and more trees. For instance, it is often cited that trees maintain the ecological balance at all levels. In addition, governments and authorities should initiate awareness programs to educate people to save more trees. By this way, the harmful consequences of pollution can be alleviated.
In the light of the above discussion, it can be concluded that the impact of environmental pollution is prominent, which can be reduced by the concerted efforts of governments and individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat large lands are cleared up due to an increase in number of industries and cau...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fforts of governments and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16064257028 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09013636576 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.507411992 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806910487763 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286997083977 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320705218973 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436277250605 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316026984276 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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