If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area will you choose?

Climate change is real and it's happening. Unfortunately, even after numerous awareness campaigns, there are still so many people who still don't care about the consequences of this event, no matter how fatal it will eventually turn out to be. Being such catastrophic event, if i want to study the underlying areas of climate change, it would be the reasons as so to why this is happening and how we can prevent or contain it's inevitable outcomes.

One of most important and undeniable reason of this situation is the Greenhouse effect. This effect is seen everywhere, with more broader connections such as Global Warming. Due to this, Earth's temperature is increasing rapidly leading to melting of several glaciers which can cause disastrous consequences. If this keeps on happening at such alarming rates, soon there will be destructive floods, loss of human and animal life and other unforeseen outcomes which can even lead to extinction level situations.

The reason why this effect is happening, is because of our careless and unacceptable attitude. We, humans, are still not seeing the kind of outcomes such atrocities can bring on the humanity. Even after so much awareness around the concept of Global Warming is happening, still there are companies who are continuously emitting harmful gases that damages our ecosystem and our environmental habitats. Gases like, CO2, CFCs can cause imminent rise in the global temperature and also cause destructive effects on Ozone layer, which will lead to penetration of harmful UV from sun, causing unimaginable problems at global level.

Hence, studying greenhouse effect and finding how it's effects can be minimized can really help in avoiding the inevitable situations climatic change can introduce. Moreover, providing awareness to the people on how critical this situation can become, is extremely crucial now.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...here are still so many people who still dont care about the consequences of this eve...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o be. Being such catastrophic event, if i want to study the underlying areas of c...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'broader' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: broader
...t. This effect is seen everywhere, with more broader connections such as Global Warming. Due...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, really, so, still, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3277027027 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87212038594 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0768721345 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.307692308 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968938308416 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338183611401 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470215946003 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614690337568 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045709506857 0.0609392437508 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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