Recently, the phenomenon of climate change in its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I have to choose a specific field of climate change, I will be enthusiastic about studying global warming. The most important factors which cause global warming are greenhouses emission, deforestation and also carbon footprint.
From the Scientific viewpoints, greenhouses emission and carbon dioxide both play a significant role in rising weather and sea temperature. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the excessive use of fossil fuels leads to increasing rate of greenhouse gasses and carbon dioxide. Thus, the detrimental effects of these gasses emission are quite obvious.
Furthermore, within the realm of the environment, forests act as a deterrent to the global warming. Moreover, based on a substantial number of studies, deforestation leads to higher temperature weather. According to my personal experience, when I was a child, more forests and trees can be seen and the rate of rainfalls each year was adequate, but recently because of the deforestation the rainfall rate sharply decreases. Hence, it is corrected to presume that destroy the forest has irreparable side effects.
To conclude, while there are several arguments about the ways preventing global warming, I profoundly believe that the reducing greenhouses gasses emission and prevent deforestation would be unbelievably beneficial and I would choose study global warming to tackle the problems mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 381, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gasses'' or 'gas's'?
Suggestion: gasses'; gas's
... Thus, the detrimental effects of these gasses emission are quite obvious. Furtherm...
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Line 8, column 235, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
...elievably beneficial and I would choose study global warming to tackle the problems m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69230769231 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15341761617 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636752136752 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6276750734 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.090909091 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749015091237 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293659861024 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580634520842 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503450937241 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649039097312 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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