If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?
Nowadays, changes in the weather have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether climate change and the environment is a controversial subject for studies or not?”. It is a widely held view that preserving natural ecosystem is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that the importance of this issue must be surveyed to enjoy clear and eco-friendly nature.
To begin with, it is a common belief that climate changes play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that global warming has a significant influence on climate change. Secondly, it can be argued that the green gases that emitted from the industrial factories might be the other factor in changing the weather and lead to the destruction of the ozone layer. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the toxic gases that spread from the defective vehicle contribute to the ecosystem as well as by increasing the temperature the sea level will be increased by melting ice caps.
However, there is no doubt that some informed decision must be taken to address the negative aspects of climate changes. Various programs must be held to raise public awareness in order to preserve their natural ecosystem. Moreover, it is quite clear that using the renewable source of energy, such as solar or electronic fuels might help to reduce the climate changes. Also, forestation can be the other possible approach increase the amount of oxygen.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that efficient decision must be taken into consideration to prevent the climate changes. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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- It is believed that some people are born with creativity and specific talents. However, it's sometimes claimed that taught developed creativity, and any child can become good sports person or musician. Discuss the two ideas. 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ays, changes in the weather have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19344262295 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88747305994 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.408221465 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0763709971785 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273138843483 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331064795508 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449535416257 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196214613573 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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