n 21st century, technology is changing rapidly due to the innovation and research, and everyday a innovation is on horizon which demands people to forget older technology and learn new one. I am inclined to believe in Alvin toffler's quote and in this essay I will explain my position.
Firstly, owing to the tremendous amount of innovation in the field of science and technology, business market has become more challenging which has increased the pressure on employees to learn new technology. People, who are not adaptive enough to learn new things, will be treated as illiterate for market and for them it will be difficult to sustain. For example, In software development industry, programmers have to learn new programming languages to be in the business. Therefore, learning new things is the only way forward and everyone should embrace this reality.
In addition to, our renowned scientists also unlearn the existing theories, relearn it and modify it into new theories which provide tremendous benefits to the world. For instance, everyone is aware that technology is growing rapidly and the reason behind is that scientists are questing for innovations and improvements in the existing technology frequently.
In conclusion, from the above analysis, it is obvious that the illiterate of the 21st century will not be those cannot read and write but those who cannot learn, unlearn and relearn.
- Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree? 88
- Is it better to be a good listener or good talker? 88
- The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants for our planet and give the solution. 80
- Does the advent of internet change the role of teacher? To what extent do you agree? 85
- Does the advent of internet change the role of the teacher To what extent do you agree 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
n 21st century, technology is changing ra...
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Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...due to the innovation and research, and everyday a innovation is on horizon which demand...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e innovation and research, and everyday a innovation is on horizon which demands ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25221238938 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85957468139 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.540788788 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.888888889 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316195521181 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130418965472 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.219348723652 0.071462118173 307% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239930084744 0.151781067708 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.28627570374 0.0609392437508 470% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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