Is imitating celebrities in sports and movies good or bad?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad. While it is possible to claim that it has numerous advantageous by following positive things in your normal life, my view that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I will discuss the how following the celebrities having a good impact in your life.
There are several reasons why imitating celebrities is better in our daily life. One of them is that celebrities following the advanced style of clothing and style so people can use same things. It can be argued that thousand of the follower can same things. It should also be taken into account that positive thing can be followed but it should not impact own financial things. For example, Harvard published survey which conducted in 2013 that in football 90% of people Messi style and clothes.
Those who argue for following celebrities in negative impact have a different view and say that is can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that people can't save money by wasting buying clothes and other sports kit. Then, There are concerns about it impact financially it own house should.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, In my opinion, following celebrities only positive thing if you able to afford.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92477876106 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55841381399 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3032928983 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.75 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238108380992 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922351314226 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141428561812 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145190858173 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1161594423 0.0609392437508 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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