With the increase of digital media available online, the role of the library has become obsolete. Universities should only procure digital materials rather than constantly textbooks. Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view.
Due to the advanced technology, e-book is a new option to access knowledge. Therefore, it is a common topic for people to think whether library should only purchase digital learning materials or textbooks. My personal opinion is buying more e-books.
There is no doubt that library had played an important role in campus. Many library holds thousand of academic resources which have proven. The printed textbooks need to go through many rigorous process before it published. Every textbook’s author needs to take their responsibility for their words and they have to pay the price if the information is fake. Therefore, the content of a printed textbook is reliable
On the other hand, digital books provide students and professors access knowledge more efficient and more eco-friendly. The Internet and computer allow them to receive the information remotely. For instance, many Taiwanese researchers access the library of the United States to acquire related published which refer to their studies. Besides, digital books is more friendly to the environment compared with the traditional printed books. More specifically, using digital books, we can save thousands trees.
In conclusion, textbooks have been proven with rigorous process while the advantage of digital books is more efficient and more eco-friendly. My personal opinion is universities should take responsibility for our planet and provide a easy way for professors and students to access knowledge.
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| 2019-06-14 | Karie Tseng | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56194690265 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95878772114 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588495575221 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5405371945 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7857142857 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147006487689 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507227670712 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585516598023 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976359326677 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400078602479 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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