One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is there is a colossal upsurge about tourism. There is a widespread worry that an increase in tourism is beneficial for local culture but some proponents say it has drawbacks. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious considerations.
There are many arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that the myriad influx in tourism helps to generate income for local and let the world know the importance of their culture. In fact, not only do tourism industry help to preserve the culture developed by ancestors but also helps to transfer to the new generations. For instance, the culture of Magar community of Gorkha, Nepal are welcoming tourist by their cultural dance and at the same time, the teenagers are knowing about it. Needless to say, all these merits stand local culture in good stead, as far as positive aspect is considered.
On the other hand, detrimental aspect of this argument is that local community are mimicking the western culture from the tourist and following it. Besides, it endangers local culture. For example, there are a number of researches by various governmental bodies that show that in Australia most of the new generation people speak english as a result, the aboriginals' native language is in danger. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the local tourist influx.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of tourist for local culture are indeed too great to ignore.
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Suggestion: know
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, so, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97701149425 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7057188057 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3306793382 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252236545375 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092623313409 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691383509541 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154717095152 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707680893826 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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