An increasing number of people choose to study and work in big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Recently, the phenomenon of studing and working at the same time in new and modern nations among populations and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although doing these two activities at the same time is beneficial as it regarded by substantial numbers of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that doing these two activities at the same time has some catastrophic effects on their lives.
From a social standpoint, studying besides working at the same time has several disadvantages. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the demerits of studying when people have their own jobs. This survey showed these pupils cannot gain appropriate score on their courses. It is generally accepted that pupils should study their cources as the same time that they are in their classes. Furthermore, due to the stressful circumstances of their jobs including the strict regulation at their work, they occasionally miss their classes and this issue affects theie effeciency.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that the idea of instructing and working at the same time has some adherents. These settlers argued that due to meet their financial needs and enhancing the level of society status, they need to do these activities at the same time. According to research undertakan by a prestigious world-renowned university, an array of people who immigrate to another country or big cities have to going to work, but for reaching the high status and earning sufficient sallary, they need to enhance their knowledge and academic level.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of performing both studying and having occupation far more outweigh its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29530201342 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93704495243 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3466241413 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124347658043 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486470705678 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319347347047 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678155671237 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321195838849 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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