Recently, the phenomenon of choosing to study and work in big cities and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that this increasing interest can be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that this kind of living can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support educating and working in the big cities. At first, the disadvantage with big cities is crowded streets and wasting time in them. However, there are better facilities for students to study and learn recent knowledge. For example, the renowned and reputed universities such as Harvard located in big cities with the best philosophers
In addition, living in big cities are always costing and needs a higher income than small cities, which are cheaper for living there. But, in the large cities, people have more opportunities to find a good job with a higher salary. For instance, a recent research conducted by THN University researchers in 2017 has shown that a significant number of people who work and study in the big cities like Melbourne are in the better situation in their lifetime.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite all advantages with living in the country and the small towns, the benefits of choosing to live in big cities far outweighed of advantages with living in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06640625 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83706449284 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56640625 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1845488853 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.7 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.25397266985 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330090884962 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116275124321 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520374500062 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175305647677 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510348718501 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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