In this days, traveling to space is an imaginary opinion and scientists are very fascinated toward it.
Although this idea is great, the environmental issues in the earth are more important and at first, we should release it of these problems before thinking about space traveling. For the purpose of this essay, I would analyze some of the environmental problems.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss the idea of space traveling, if we did have not solved the environmental issues on our planet. At first, the impacts of the greenhouse gases have not resolved after a long period of their appearance. The governments must to spent costs in regard to providing facilities that could clean the effects of greenhouse gases from the earth. For example, working to increase the public transportation equipment and encouraging people to use the public vehicles is the task of government in this case.
In addition, there are many people on our planet that have not an ability to feeding. The sense of philanthropic says we should think about the hungry people before spending money to travel to space. For instance, a recent research conducted by MYT University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of people in African countries such as Namibia and Ethiopia need to help from wealthy countries to fulfill the costs of treating their patients and feeding the hungry people.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the space traveling, I profoundly believe that the environmental problems are threatening all living creatures on the earth and resolving these issues is vital before this fantastic traveling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18587360595 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84770982084 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5690097864 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343127132171 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120791711704 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929429330401 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18878134475 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630956926789 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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