The Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this burgeoning epoch of mass communication, a contemporary human dwells in a world which is shaped by the latest trends and approaches coming across the globe points for years. The opponents and proponents have their perceptual intellection to support their ideas. Before deducing a fair conclusion, I am going to shed some light on both the aspects in the upcoming paragraphs.
According to the first school of thought, many people say that mass communication is an essential part of everyone's life due to the fact that it provides us with information through different sources such as the internet, newspaper, magazines and social media. Apart from that, an individual can share their ideas, as well as gain information through mass communication and people get the latest news in a very short time. In addition to it, mass communication let families communicate with their kids who are living far away from them.
According to the second school of thought, every coin has two sides, many people believe that the authenticity of the information provided by the mass communication platforms like Facebook and Instagram might not be genuine. Moreover, mass communication also distracts the mind of youngsters from their studies because children these days spent almost the entire time on social media platforms rather than studying. last but not the least, as much as media can connect us with people all over the world it can disconnect us from the people sitting right in front of us.
To perorate, after having a lot of thoughts and deliberations with myself on this topic, I inclined to state that yes society should use the electronic information for the betterment of the society as a whole but If a person has any doubt about any information then he should confirm first with Right Information
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 416, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...l media platforms rather than studying. last but not the least, as much as media can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08361204013 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87000175987 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8467650676 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.9669160288 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13469672145 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544675341242 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425750544362 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755613466934 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478602529566 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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