investment being done by government

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ny claiming people that it is beneficial which others reject notions. The substa...
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...ople that it is beneficial which others reject notions. The substantial of this ...
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...rmer proposition appears rational. This essay will further elaborate my views ...
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...oposition appears rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favo...
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...ther elaborate my views for favoring the positive and negative impact of this tre...
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...s will lead a logical conclusion. The are myriad of regions which will further mo...
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...ve and thrive in the country. Consequent Another pivot aspect of this argument is...
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...and painting induce discipline in people . Needless to say all these merits stand...
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...erves the investment desired development .Besides, the governments responsible for...
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...ves the investment desired development .Besides, the governments responsible for provid...
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...ent why many are in favors of this trend . According to the argument aforemen...
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...d music are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22943722944 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71217470254 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7965890995 50.4703680194 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.222222222 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236971017821 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869259986554 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125301354405 0.071462118173 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15937205368 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11054161851 0.0609392437508 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.