It is common that most people are in poor health. Outline how people can change their lifestyles and how nations can adjust the health care system to tackle this issue.
Healthy lifestyle always depends on good quality food intake by any citizens. With advent of technology and fast way of life, most of the families goes for quick meal which not only impacts elders' health, but also children are badly affected by this. In this essay, some of the reasons and solutions are explained in detailed before arriving at logical conclusion.
To begin with, in a busy world, most of us are least bothered about the physical and mental health which creates a lasting impact to ourself and loved ones. Most of the working people and children prefer fast foods that creates major health hazards such as high blood pressure, diabetes, cancer and many deadly illness. Some of the poor children in a developing countries struggle to get a meal for their survival.
Also, the packaged food contains harmful preservatives which causes serious and long lasting impact to any person who consumes it for a longer run.
So, people must practice mindfulness and concentrate on healthy lifestyle changes such as adding more nutrient rich diet and eradicate packaged intake to the maximum and follow mindfulness and physical exercises on a regular basis. Government also should implement strict laws and add more taxes against these packaged food by concentrating more on providing healthy free meal for poor children in public schools who are the future generations that decide the wealth of any nation.
To conclude, by regulating the policies discussed above along with proper healthcare system, the healthy future generations and a Nation becomes possible because, the economy and growth of any nation depends on its people and their health in major.
- In some countries, the number of shooting massacres is on the rise because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 77
- Companies along with making money, should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or not? 85
- Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss 80
- Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products, or is it the responsibility of producers? 50
- Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles skates the subway etc 88
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18081180812 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52294383038 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5259771384 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.4 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176803212975 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661198082862 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455603446769 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933848901695 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571050767044 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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