Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate on the preservation of the traditional buildings, which attracted the numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the public. It can be agreed that it is very essential to keep the old buildings safe, while on the other hand stands perspective that preserving the ancient building is just a wastage of the time and money. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons why there is need to take some steps to preserve the old buildings but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that the traditional buildings are main source income for tourist economy and it can also attract foreign residents. Moreover, keeping the old infrastructure safe will not only help the people to learn about their past ages but it will also help the nation to preserve the values and beliefs of old times. Thereby, preserving the old building can benefit the whole nation.
Notwithstanding, some people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that the old buildings can be destroyed to create more houses. Furthermore, people also believe that instead of focusing and investing money on the building preservation government can do something in some other areas that need more attention like as, hospitals, poverty, road safety and so on.
In the view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that although the reason for investing money to overcome other issues is reasonable, the phenomena of keeping the old buildings safe cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06513409962 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76610309215 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9981383225 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.888888889 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998706105663 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427561737878 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287290847784 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627679383668 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128108568239 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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