It is important to maintain the balance between work and other aspects of one's life such a family and leisure activities. Please give your opinion about how important to maintain balance and why some people think it is hard to do so?
Nowadays, the controversial issue of respect to work-life balance can never be ignored. there is an ongoing debate on whether it is important to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of life. From my perspective, I believe it is extremely essential and hard to be achieved.
First and foremost, it is important to maintain the balance between work and personal life due to the fact that losing balance may lead to physical and mental problems. The reason is that if people are not able to take a break from long hours of heavy work, it will do harm to their health. For example, if office workers sit at their desks for a long time and cannot relax, they will suffer from backache and even diseases. Therefore, proper relaxation can help people avoid some health problems.
On the other hand, it is difficult for people to find a balance between work and life because of limited time and energy. To be more specific, people's total time is flexed, and when work takes up most of it, there isn't much left for personal life. For instance, after a long day work, people are more likely to go home and relax than join friends in a club. Thus, people may fail to maintain a balance between work and other aspects of life.
In a nutshell, having considered all arguments above, we may reach the conclusion that achieving the balance between work and private life may be necessary for good health, but it is difficult to manage due to the limited time and energy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70342205323 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39540104988 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5236206623 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.083333333 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300605138289 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135009080089 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11937679183 0.071462118173 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192299945864 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713175063326 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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