It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do
so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?
The beautiful building of the city talks about the history and architecture of the era. A city is build over the years and the artistic resemblence differenciates it with unique culture and progress over the years. There has been an heated debate with the public opinion that old buildings should be demolished and should pave way for modern astetic ones.
Many experts beleive that the old buidling will have an impact on society. The evolution will help people to understand the vibrant culutres of that era. This also helps in attracting tourists and generate revenue. For example, Berlin still has buildings which are centuries old and is a major hub for tourist. The cost plays an important role, these structures should be modified to the modern needs with advancement of technology.
On the other hand, some people beleive that new age buildings will help better navigation around as well as build for modern needs. The city would have the most number of these building. Let us assume a scenario that we would like to air condition these building it would be an expensive modification, rather we could build a new one with more efficient structure. There are some exception where real estate prices are high and the safety of the structure is questionable then it is a rational decision to pull the building down or modify accordingly.
In conclusion, due to the reason outlined above it is very important to preserve the valuable buildings of the past. With all our efforts the upcoming buildings can have a better and modern thinking, which can be beneficial for sustainability for a longer generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...progress over the years. There has been an heated debate with the public opinion t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9594095941 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71658401417 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7428597104 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192058332648 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636501805679 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425770217177 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120478790683 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203000823389 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.