It is unwise to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do what extend do you agree or disagree?
In recent years there has been colossal upsurge in the ongoing trend that getting married before completing the studies is unwise. Some people believe that it is always a negative impact of getting married without any proper foundation. While others disagree. In this essay, I will elaborate the negative impacts ascending in getting married without any proper back-up.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons, firstly, getting married before completion of studies led to lack of focus in schooling, Increasing in family responsibilities loose attention in schools and failure in career. For example, in countries’ like India, teenagers getting indulged themselves on studies to achieve success in careers with persevere, but due to pressure of parents on marriages causing them to devastate their future careers and resulting to halt their education. Clearly, it is highly advisable that an apropos way to focus shall be made to avert getting married before completing the schooling.
Furthermore, another pivotal facets comes from the fact that, the drastic effects on married life is on losing of jobs. A prodigy may not be able to find a long way run in stability of jobs and thus their careers always in lack expertise as such due to responsibilities they instill. For example, In Australia, most people getting married at early stages without right jobs are in sort of pressure, tensions which they cannot accentuate in jobs works and resulting to be unstable in their job careers. Apparently, in this ways lack of jobs are increasing the financial crisis and lead family’s separation.
To recapitulate from the arguments aforementioned, one can conclude that having the negative facets of married life, but the upside of negative impacts shall be frugally accentuated and suitable decisions shall be made in getting married.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: facets'; facet's
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 31.9359605911 175% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34931506849 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89513021217 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3677201798 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22895403515 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896348693952 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642762504498 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137582240846 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550566971714 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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