"It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job".
Do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is a lifelong decision which some people take before getting their degrees completed or getting in employment while some does after achieving this. It is advocate by many that getting married without finishing the qualification and without getting settled with a job is truly a lunatic step some young people usually takes. This essay will discuss the reasons why one should not tie the knots prior to their studies and jobs.
It is noteworthy that marriage brings numerous family responsibilities along with it. After marriage the couple is not responsible to their own responsibility only, though they have each other parent's responsibility as well. In such cases it becomes indeed next to impossible to concentrate on their academic as well as job career. Therefore, to finish ones education and get establish with a job is always a better thing to do before marriage.
Furthermore, the life after marriage is considered to be full of financial expenses. Once a couple get into marriage, they will start experiencing several expenses which might abstain them from finishing up their qualifications. For instance, expenditures such as rent, food, bills etc may impose them with huge financial burden. And that will be hard to get done by one individual. So if one will complete their education and get settled in a job before marriage may help another partner in leading a smooth life .
This essay has discussed how not completing one's education and getting a job before marriage may put extra financial pressure on one partner as well as it may impose them with several responsibilities for the family. In my way of opinion, I strongly tend to believe that one should always get done with their academic and also should get established with the job prior to marriage to lead a happily married life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...another partner in leading a smooth life . This essay has discussed how not com...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84067557879 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541528239203 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2237469683 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217303732936 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830520199509 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686744480304 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147483594226 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385426108379 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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