Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trends?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in large shopping malls. there is a wide spread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. however, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
there are number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant is that large shopping malls can not only contribute to large shopping malls various facility like parking, banking but also lead to a numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefits more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience needless, to say all these merits stand one is good stead, as far argumenting their changes of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
there are however, some pitfalls that can easily over whelm the potential benefits of large shopping malls destroy the small scale industry. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people not only realized its gravity, but magnitude of its rebercussions, when it comes to today’s ever changing life styles. Besides it imp[act on is fare reaching indeed. Hence, Its apparent why many are against.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of large shopping malls are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14566929134 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84268599422 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.4236566511 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211475758441 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721294016409 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732144806673 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127155925412 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195590778734 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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