Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss the both sides.
In these days there is no doubt that the latest trend of opening of new malls is getting popular. But is true that the malls can replace the small shops in the neighborhood in cities and towns or people still prefer to buy stuff from smaller shops rather than malls? This essay will discuss the both side and will make the opinion on the facts.
Malls are spreading across the metropolitan cities and towns like a fire. Malls are created on the idea of one stop shop and provide the wide range of brands, it not only saves the time of a customer but also the Air-Conditioned environment does not let a customer feel tired. For example, customer visits a mall, then he can shop a variety of things like grocery, garments, electronics and can also serve food at food court. Therefore, for a frequent visitor, mall is the convenient option.
On Contrary to this, small shops are still popular in peoples and still many customers prefer to shop from small shops. Although the malls are attracting the customers as they have so much to offer, still some buyers prefer small shops. While there are multiple reasons behind preferring small shops over the mall, the main reason behind this is the prices, that attract the buyers and shops in malls cannot offer the same due to the maintenance cost is high in malls. As a result, customer can get the good prices on small shops.
The malls are rapidly replacing the small shops in cities and towns, but still there are small shops popular among the buyers for many reasons. In my opinion there should be a balance between both so the customer has the option to choose between the ease of shopping or cheap prices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'serve'
Suggestion: serve
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6406779661 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26902502769 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528813559322 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7550096633 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324952442872 0.242375264174 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121353049103 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660677288502 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211729065433 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692260166432 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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