Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
It has been common to see the growth of big shoopings in a certain area recently due to the fact that population is increasing by leaps and bounds. People tend to go to big centers merely because it is likely to find their needed goods. Also, the prices are a good attractiveness which make big centers very crowed. People living in small towns rifly visit big cities to go for shopping. When I was young, I remember that I used to go to the same shopping center because it was the only big shopping I had in my city. Later on, as my city started growing, other centers started being developed.
Moreover, big cities require large shoppings centers and it has been observed throughout the years that the number of big cities has increased. Furthermore, there is a necessity to have more large malls because of the attendancy of demand.
However, small bussines are bankrupt in some locations. As big shopping centers start showing up, they low prices which tend to break small centers.
Finally, due to the increase in population and the expansion of cities, it has been usual to see the replacement of small shops for large ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls because of the attendancy of demand. However, small bussines are bankrupt in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53385082434 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 379.143842365 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4508668369 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117301233883 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498483494168 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469583711635 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973503685303 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424848744223 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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