Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
The importance of large shopping malls are replacing small shops which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this nation. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but rthe most preponderant one stems from the fact that all provisions are available at under one roof and we do not have to go anywhere else to buy other things. Consequently,. we saves lot of time if we are living in a metropolitian city, we may be aware of traffic. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that all provisions and other items can be available in wholesale rates. Needless to say, all there merits are stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some merits but one of crucial effects is that everytrhing we got a news from news channel that a bogus company are making fake goods in market. Besides, the quality of products will be flawless and very rich. Hence,it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of large shopping malls are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94466403162 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71720660529 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5417722664 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153617383037 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515918716838 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683024139579 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920087798785 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767042715064 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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