Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What's your opinion? Good or bad.
In contemporary era, the human society is forging ahead at an amazing rate in various realms. Yet, at the same time, the grave issue that small shops are replaced by large shopping malls has triggered intense controversy. In my opinion, small shops would not be replaced.
Undeniably, it is more likely that large shopping malls provide convenience for people because people can achieve one-stop shopping. More specifically, majority of people prefer to go to the shopping malls rather than the single stores because varieties of options are available in one complex. As a result, a pleasant shopping experience can be acquired in large shopping malls.
Nevertheless, although large shopping malls have kinds of options, it should recognize that things are quite different in rural areas where small shops still play an essential role. In particular, shopping malls always locate in city center, so it is not possible for people who live in suburbs to buy daily necessities. In addition, in remote areas with limited demands for goods, it is obviously that building a shopping mall is actually waste money. small stores, therefore, which can satisfy local residence’s daily demands, may be a better choice.
In summarize, from what has been discussed, I highly support the idea that small shops will always be existed due to the different location. There is no denying that the benefit that small shops bring to local residents is that large shopping malls cannot provide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, in addition, in particular, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 8.36945812808 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28870292887 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69818358798 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.968122311 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320186421166 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127426396906 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775543665069 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206921225031 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040615147337 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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