Space exploration was one of the biggest achievement in the history of mankind. While many people think that resources invested on the space exploration is a complete waste, I completely disagree with their opinion. This essay will discuss why and how the discovery of space has brought many changes in the life.
Firstly, the exploration of space has unfolded many facts which were unknown at one time. The discovery gave scientists and researchers the opportunities to study the space by sending and thus evaluate and measure the affect of external environment on the planet earth. For example, It is due to the study of space that our scientist can predict the forecast of lunar and solar eclipse. Space exploration has proven to be the most prolific study for the betterment of mankind.
Despite the fact plenty of useful information about space that is available with us today was possible because of the discovery of space, a lot of people just ignores this fact and feel no difference in their day to day life. The discovery has lead to the rapid invention of the technologies around us in the modern world. It has also helped flourish the space industry which provide employment to a lot of young aspirants who want to study space.
In conclusion, I can say that the revolution in the space technology has brought significant comfort in the day to day life of a human being and its proves that space exploration was not a waste but the most important scientific discovery till the date.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding technologies'?
Suggestion: the surrounding technologies
...very has lead to the rapid invention of the technologies around us in the modern world. It has also helped...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proofs' (noun) instead of proves (verb)?
Suggestion: proofs
...ay to day life of a human being and its proves that space exploration was not a waste ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85992217899 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70916614847 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533073929961 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2870447346 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.545454545 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0759873511137 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365290565832 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289689202778 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534034290481 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222925244972 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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