In the last century when human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said: "Space exploration is a big step for mankind". Butsome pleople think it makes little difference to our daily life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Space exploration was one of the biggest achievement in the history of mankind. While many people think that resources invested on the space exploration is a complete waste, I completely disagree with their opinion. This essay will discuss why and how the discovery of space has brought many changes in the life.

Firstly, the exploration of space has unfolded many facts which were unknown at one time. The discovery gave scientists and researchers the opportunities to study the space by sending and thus evaluate and measure the affect of external environment on the planet earth. For example, It is due to the study of space that our scientist can predict the forecast of lunar and solar eclipse. Space exploration has proven to be the most prolific study for the betterment of mankind.

Today, we are sending a number of satellites to different orbits in the space. These satellites gather a lot of useful information which is used by us in day to day life. For example, It is due to the satellites that we can use the GPS service to conveniently locate our destination. All of this was not possible had space not been discovered.

In conclusion, I can say that the revolution in the space technology has brought significant comfort in the day to day life of a human being and its proves that space exploration was not a waste but the most important scientific discovery till the date.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: PROVE_PROOF[2]
Message: Did you mean 'proofs' (noun) instead of proves (verb)?
Suggestion: proofs
...ay to day life of a human being and its proves that space exploration was not a waste ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84166666667 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81715972016 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529166666667 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3474006699 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930308456454 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396235956488 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260772332962 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600240363625 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137307526559 0.0609392437508 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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