life experience is a better teacher than school or foreign education.
The importance of school or foreign education which was always debatable has now more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the latter proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which I will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that from life experience is a not good teacher because people are not able to get knowledge about all over the world. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that to do study in foreign country is more helpful for student as compared to life experience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more demerits but one of the crucial effects is that when people are do study they are able to get more information about study and it is very helpful for them as well as they get knowledge about their environment. Besides, for doing study has more benefits as people can do any job which is helpful for them. Hence, it is apparent why many are favor of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of doing study are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81640625 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59160479342 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54296875 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4385081363 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741821324081 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268667770295 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442199422356 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443138002408 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550322054743 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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