Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.
The importance of noways, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly time for their personal life which was always debate has become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other some people reject this notion. The substantial influences has trend sparked controversy potential impact over recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate negative views points and lead to logical conclusion in upcoming paragraphs.
There are myriad reasons further explain arguments one the most preponderant stems can explain some effects In modern era technology has been widely spread, so everyone hectic their lifestyle for some different purposes. For instances, much people hectic their lifestyle, they have enough time to spend their family. There are some pitfall effect, they are not known about their families problems and their children suggestion. which is bad effect for their children upcoming time. Needless to say,all these demerit stand in a bad stead.
Elaborating my view points , there are some pitfalls and play crucial role their life, much people hectic their lifestyle. they are not spend time their friends and families members. They are not well known about it and they are plays bad effects.
According to view points aforementioned above, they are play crucial effect their life, so people should they are spend much time their personal life and their families, and they known their problem and share conversation to each other indeed to great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32669322709 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44156641025 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7687428834 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.846153846 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460175924886 0.242375264174 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160899366341 0.0925447433944 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16367259298 0.071462118173 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297727607089 0.151781067708 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387788921938 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.