Lifestyle affects health, how should health/ medical department responds?
Recently, the phenomenon of healthy lifestyle and its corresponding effects has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by manythat healthy eating is a person's own choice, such issue is regarded both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe the health and medical department should initiate some bold steps in this regard. I will discuss the same throughout this essay.
To begin with, from sociological standpoint, Fast and junk food suits this rapid pace of life, this attitude can provide society with some noticeable effects which is rooted in the fact that human behavior is more attracted towards fast and easy stuff are inextricably bound up. In my own experience, in an academic experiment conducted by me in university discovered that health department are in keen attempts to keep people off from junk food and providing them nutritional awareness. Thus, the beneficial ramification of it can bee seen apparently in the form of decline in the sale of local fast food chains.
Within the realm of science, its the social duty of medical centres to keep citizens updated about the negative effects of the opting lazy and tardy lifestyle. As a tangible example, a research undertaken by the students of a prestigious university which has asserted the upside of health awareness programs is correlated with the positivity of having healthier lifestyle of people who attend it. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of effects of healthy life style is very much dependent on the health related programs.
To recapitulate, I profoundly believe the benefits of opting healthier life style and having state awareness programs as imperative measure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, so, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28260869565 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92983121409 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4879492515 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16745723795 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612041094167 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807082324225 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886945461036 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655458726293 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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