Long distance communication is helpful for both doctors and patients. Give Your opinion about this statement.
It is irrefutable to say that the technological inventions have changed the way people communicate with their doctors. Nowadays, long-distance communication is becoming far more popular among patients and doctors. In my opinion, long distance communication with the help of technological devices attributed many advantages to both the doctors and patients. This essay will further elaborate on the pros of using long-distance communication with both the doctors and patients and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of advantages of using wireless communication for the patients, who live in the rural areas. By talking to the GPs on the phone, the people from the countryside can not only save the cost of travelling to visit the doctor, but they can also approach the specialists quickly in the emergency conditions. For example, according to the startling new research done in Africa revealed that the majority of people are getting similar treatment on the phone as they get by visiting the hospitals.
Therefore, long-distance communication plays a vital role in the well-being of rural area people.
Furthermore, long-distance communication gave the doctors easy access to approach their customers. Moreover, it reduced the pressure on doctors head because now they have only major illness patients to look after in the hospital wards. As an illustration, a recent survey done by the Westmead hospital between a group of doctors shows that all the doctors agreed that the minor illnesses like as high blood pressure, fever and flu can be treated by talking to the patients over the phone or by email. Hence, long-distance communication helped the doctors in many ways.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that distanced communication is very helpful for both the doctors and patients.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3470790378 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10977387345 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0544776081 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385033896334 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155921046499 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118558466747 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217013930651 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098148314691 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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