In many countries, children are engaged in different kinds if paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while other considers it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in working at in a early age, There is a widespread worry that will only lead to myriad of concern in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that children are engaged in different kinds of paid work can not only contribute to work in early age but also lead to numerous other benefits it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence in concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such as system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence it is apparent why many are in favour of topic children are engaged in different kinds of paid work.
In view of argument outlined above, one can conclude that benefits is work experience, financially sound and value of hard earn money are indeed too great to ignore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ld is colossal upsurge in working at in a early age, There is a widespread worry ...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence it is apparent why many are in favour o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86192468619 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79417095525 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1556465099 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.111111111 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1651077727 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068633942303 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843624325325 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980206518419 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364685590295 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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