Nowadays with an increasing trend of building nuclear families, children often lack the connection with their grandparents. As elder's are the root of a family and they play a major role in imparting family values to these young minds. This situation has led to many social and behavioral differences.
In olden time, people used to stay together in big families, where the growing kids were able to interacts with different family members on daily basis. Studies have shown that when a child is brought up in a joint family, they have the emotional connection towards them and act as a responsible and adjusting individual in the later life. Family members like Uncle, aunt, cousins and Grand parents imparts family value to the small children of the family. So, when a people stays united with their loved ones, it helps the younger generation to grow in to a socialite person.
However, in today's time, most of the couple leave their parents house, to start their own journey. They might be located in the different city or a different country. This has created a distance between grandchildren and grandparents. As, due to busy schedule of both the parents and the child, the possibility of meeting the elders is nil. A survey has shown when kids grow in absence of elderly people, the lack the understanding of family values. They often like to stay alone and do not prefer to get socially involved.
In conclusion, couples nowadays, want to live an independent life, which has led to formation of smaller families. As, these situation has resulted into less family interaction especially between children and elders. Lack of communication between these two generation, has serious social consequences. This can be said, as most of the kids avoid going to a social gathering and prefer to have their own time.
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- Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each other while others think that people are now more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion 64
- News stories on TV and in newspaper are often accompanied by pictures Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words What is your opinion about this 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...d to formation of smaller families. As, these situation has resulted into less family interacti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97704918033 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70022245194 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2346074539 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2941176471 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76470588235 7.25397266985 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11723796787 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395946558629 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452964455291 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761938423149 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245838364909 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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