Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forest animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved.
Our ecosystem and specifically natural resources are in danger in a current scenario all around the globe. Every day we see in the news articles or listen a new on the TV that natural resources like jungle, animals, and water are getting reduced day by day. Firstly, this essay will discuss the reason for the disappearing of one of the vital resource like forest and secondly, it will provide methods to overcome it.
To start with, Trees plays one of the key roles in all living being life. But, if we see the number of the trend of forest are getting declined day by day. It is happening in the name of urbanization and industrialization. Acres of forest are being deforested and factories and new housing societies are being constructed over it. For instance, a recent example of it Mumbai one of the big forest areas has been deforested to construct the metro line.
Therefore, we have to step-up and come with a proper plan on how to save trees. We know that being human being we cannot survive without oxygen, and trees are the only resource which produced oxygen. Moreover, foods and other most essential elements which are being used to manufacture medicines we get from plants. For example, In the recent report presented by Glaxo company, it has been mentioned that 80 percent of chemicals sources plant only. So, we have to take important steps to conserve it.
In a nutshell, forest saves human life and animal life as well by producing oxygen and providing food and fruits, etc. As a result of it, in my opinion, we should always be protective of the most important natural resource.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77142857143 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60850013594 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5266358094 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0666666667 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173190287684 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545712697435 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372040387705 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106244826699 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367625570188 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.5 Out of 90
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